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Monday, November 10, 2025

CONSUELO JONES - PART ONE - A Short Story By Kenneth Howard Smith

 CONSUELO JONES

A SHORT STORY BY KENNETH HOWARD SMITH
— refreshed, smoothed, and dressed in 1940s Hollywood noir —

PROLOGUE — THE LONG GOODBYE BEFORE THE GUNS

They called it a war because wars brought budgets and banners and men with medals who liked to be thanked in public. It began, like many of the good stories, with a small thing that wouldn’t stop growing: a corner of the border where cheap weed and cheap guns moved across the line like a rumor. Then the rumor learned how to organize—money, muscle, men in uniforms who took a second look at their paychecks—and it moved on to swallowing cities. By the time the governors met in the Rockies, the problem wasn’t smuggling anymore; it was a country unraveling at both seams.

In the thick corridors of the Pentagon, General Fred Smith kept his desk lamp burning late and his throat a little raw from the briefings. He had watched wars from behind maps five times over, and he’d learned the arithmetic of urgency: if you wanted things to move, give them a name and a person. When the Homeland committee asked for options, the Joint Chiefs’ databases coughed up one odd, dusty thing: a war-college thesis written by a young 2nd Lieutenant with a temperament like a desert wind—Consuelo Louise Jones. It was titled, bluntly, “Project Santa Ana Hidalgo.” It read like the kind of crazy plan officers toss off when sleep is a smokescreen for imagination—and like the kind of crazy plan that fits exactly the contours of a crisis.

She had written it in the late seventies, a skinny lieutenant with more questions than avenues. They’d mocked it then. It wound up in the bottom drawer of the war college archive, given the “Kerry Dale” award for dizzy audacity. Now, with governors muttering about secession and a drug cartel holding a capital like a prize, somebody in an office with a lot of pull decided the old paper deserved a modern hand. The author lived quietly in a modest condominium, the shape of her life folded neat as a burial flag above the mantelpiece.

On her forty-fifth birthday, Major Consuelo Jones—reserve, scientist of caves, programmer for old languages, desert-born and a little stubborn—was roughed awake by a knock that sounded like an iron fist. Two Air Force agents at the door, then a voice on speaker like a summons from a different life: “Colonel Jones. The president needs you.” They gave her a promotion in two sentences and borrowed her for a war that smelled like smoke and money and ruin.

CHAPTER ONE — THE WOMAN WHO KNEW THE DESERT

Rosamond called itself small by the map’s standards and enormous by the sky’s. In that high desert Claustrophobics of asphalt and rumor, Consuelo learned most of what she was. Her childhood was a sequence of star-bent nights and afternoons full of things that crawled and hid—caves where blind fish made their slow, patient lives, archaeological trenches that smelled of dust and history, and the hush of secret airstrips where hulking STOL planes took off like bullets into heat mirages.

Her father taught her the economy of kindness—offer a drink, offer a ride, show a stranger the shape of home—and the first time she ever learned that power could be anonymous, it was in a hum of propellers and the stiff courtesy of cabin attendants. The old man who’d taken a canteen and left in a plane with no goodbye had had an ancestry in rumor; she never forgot the small human gamble of offering a cup of water and watching a life tilt minutely toward grace.

Connie—Connie Jones to the people who loved her and Major Jones to the brass—grew into a woman who held two different kinds of hands at once: the patient, practical hands that fixed radios and taught old men how to hold their spoons, and the cold, calculating hands that could coax a machine into telling the truth. She was a whiz with the early computer languages, a translator of machines, the kind of person who loved a problem because it forced the world to show its seams.

Her thesis at the War College had been a map of fractures and a plan for gluing them back together. “Santa Ana Hidalgo” was not a love letter to invasion. It was a meticulous list: lines of supply, pockets of local resistance, psychological operations for a population already skittish from fear. The class had laughed. The country would later need someone who wrote her plans like prayers.

CHAPTER TWO — THE KINGS, THE CARTEL, AND THE ROAD TO NO RETURN

Pablo Lujan’s hacienda sat high where sea and land argued. He smoked Cuban cigars like vows and looked at recordings of his own violence the way other men looked at war movies—satisfied, a little bored, impressed with the choreography of terror. He had ways to make witnesses disappear and ways to make deputies look away. He had statesmen on payroll and poor boys on call. He’d learned, the hard way, that fear purchases complicity as cleanly as any wire transfer.

In the foothills of power, governors ruminated in private on what the federal government would not do. To them, the president’s caution was a kind of cowardice, a bureaucratic indecision that left their sheriffs’ deputies dead and their towns hollowed. They came to the Colorado meeting with private jets and private resentments. They left with a fragile agreement: patience, anger, threats. The federal solicitor begged for time. Sanchez, the governor from Texas, had a shorter fuse and a longer memory of bullets.

Meanwhile, Special Agent Manuela Ortega, working in the President’s Daily Briefings, found her finger pausing over “Project Santa Ana Hidalgo.” She had been a room-mate once to a young lieutenant who wrote like she meant it. When Ortega’s fingers found the old title, her pulse picked up as though it had remembered an old tune. She could see the classroom, the thin young woman in the back with her dark glasses. “Consuelo Jones,” she breathed, tasting the past and its peculiar arithmetic of debts.

CHAPTER THREE — THE PENTAGON NIGHT

The Pentagon after midnight is a place where light and shadow bargain. Colonel Jones stood before General Smith like a woman who had half-expected to be called at any hour. He offered her a desk, a file, and a rank. He offered her a war whose edges were already sharp. He wore his authority like an old uniform. When he told her the president had upgraded her clearances and rank, it was not for the medals; it was the work he wanted done.

“You wrote a plan once,” he said softly, as if naming a child. “Now I need that mind.”

She read the file like a person who read maps for a living—slow and intense, shading in the future with ink. The country’s borders were porous in ways that felt personal; there were hideouts and followers and men who had learned to profit from disorder. The United States had the military, the money, and—for the first time in years—an administration willing to speak of extraordinary measures in ordinary rooms.

Jones knew the desert too well to romanticize it. She also knew how planning could become a litany, how a good operation was a fragile algebra of timing, deceit, and small kindnesses. She had been a student and a teacher of contingency. “Santa Ana Hidalgo” in her hands would be less a blunt instrument than a scalpel.

CHAPTER FOUR — SHADOWS IN THE CLIFFS

The places where plans are born are seldom cheering rooms. They are back rooms, airfields at dusk, diners where men sip coffee until the coffee tastes like a conspiracy. Consuelo assembled a team like a director choosing actors: an old pilot who knew STOL fields by sound, a linguist who spoke regional dialects as if they were lullabies, a tech with fingers stained from solder and late-night code. Manuela Ortega slid in like an old friend with new authority; General Smith, the sober eye. They worked with a map that was a palimpsest: federal jurisdiction on top, the cartography of cartel domains underneath, and in the margins the private fiefdoms of governors.

There were things that motioned like ghosts around them: the governors’ pet projects of secession, the President’s insistence on a cautious posture, a national media that loved a scandal more than victory. Above all, there was Pablo Lujan, who sat on a cliff of impunity and felt the law like a mosquito bite. Against him the government could throw men, ships, and satellites; against his kind you needed better: infiltration, understanding of local loyalties, a willingness to play dirty in order to stop dirtier deeds.

CHAPTER FIVE — THE NIGHT THE DESERT HUNG ITS BREATH

They moved at moonrise. Planes that had once been used for emergencies slid silently off private strips and though the flight paths were mapped, the air was thin enough to carry secrets. Consuelo’s hands were steady as she watched the readouts and listened to the tiny voices in the headsets. It was a thing of meticulous cruelty—convincing people that they had choices until the choice was gone.

They did not find heroes at first. They found small resistances—a teacher who would not sign papers, a deputy who had been paid once too often and looked ashamed, a boy who had been promised a life and got bullets. They stitched together a net of people with small grudges and large grievances. They hid their intentions in shipments of tractors and medicine. They learned to talk like locals and to smile like strangers.

Pablo Lujan learned about the operation like any man learns of a leak: eventually and angrily. He sent men, then paid men, and the bodies started to pile in roadside ditches. The press smelled the blood and called it a federal suppression. Governors bristled, and the White House’s patience thinned.

CHAPTER SIX — THE FALL AND THE PRICE

At the last, war is arithmetic without mercy. There was a raid at dawn, a hacienda that had once been a postcard now a shattered picture. Lujan realized too late that the people he thought were entirely his were not. A general’s quiet patience, that of a woman who had spent her life reading caves and machines, and a linguist who could talk a man into betraying his own name—they combined like a cut to wind.

Lujan did not go quietly. His fall made headlines that the governors used for their own fear, and the streets filled with angry men. There were funerals and congratulations, a president who could finally say he had acted, and a debate in the halls about precedents and powers. Consuelo Jones sat with the shape of the thing she had helped make—its victories, its moral grayness, its seams—and she thought of the men who gave their lives and the women who had to explain the price.

EPILOGUE — THE DESERT REMAINS

The desert remembers what is done on its skin. It keeps secrets in the shapes of dunes and the memory of footfalls. Consuelo returned to a quiet that was both blessed and haunted. They called her hero; men wrote speeches with her name folded into the middle. But the desert taught her the long view: that power that solves one thing often births another question; that kindness offered matters more than signature programs; that plans, however brilliant, always meet the unpredictable animal of human will.

There were lines drawn on maps and lines drawn in hearts. The governors kept their resentment; the federal government gained a precedent; the cartels fractured into different shades of criminal enterprise, some more cunning, some more vicious. Pablo Lujan’s fall was a triumph shouted across television rooms, but it was also a lesson, learned in money and blood, that force is only part of any solution.

Consuelo Jones placed her hands on the folded flag above her fireplace and remembered a man who drank from a canteen and vanished into a plane. She thought of Howard Hughes’ rumored ghost farms and of the nights she had listened to secret aircraft tear the heat sky. She thought, as she often did, of the long slow work of keeping a country civil: not only by muscle or law, but by the quiet economies of decency.

Outside, the desert stretched in indifferent splendor. Above, the stars kept company. Inside, a woman who had been a student and a soldier, a programmer and a cave-climber, sat with a war-plan that had become real and a life that had been marked by what she had chosen to do. For an instant, she let the day fold into the long desert night and knew she had been brave; she also knew the world would ask her to be brave again.

And so, in the slow, black theater of the West, the story of Consuelo Jones drew to a hush—a woman with a map of the future in her hand, who had walked through smoke and politics and still knew the small miracles of offering a stranger a drink. The guns had not ended everything; they had only changed the way people listened.

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